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Essay Editing

Get all the help you need crafting the best essay you can with EDMO Coaches! EDMO Coaches help kids at any grade level pore back over their writing to eliminate language mistakes, polish phrases, and correct spelling errors. In the process, kids can learn how to improve their writing on their own! In our tutoring sessions, we can go over specific essays the student has written or assign essay writing and editing exercises. Recommended materials: writing utensil and paper
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Mary Cron

Mary Cron specializes as an English tutor and values teaching young minds how to master the written word while also building self confidence. When Mary was a young student, she had tutors who gave her the self confidence and tools to pursue her dreams. And it is her passion to pass on the same enthusiasm to other young minds. She loves working with kids because as much as she is teaching them, they are teaching her about their world and perspectives. She has extensive experience tutoring in various levels that range from English Composition all the way up to Advanced Placement Literature. In addition, she has an Associates Degree in English Literature while currently working towards her BA at California State University Chico. Mary's passion is to teach young minds about the written word while also giving them confidence in how to express themselves.

Emily Cline

Emily Cline is excited to be an EDMO Coach! She is currently an undergraduate student at UCLA studying environmental science with concentrations in conservation biology and GIS. Emily loves working with kids because of the unique connections you can make and the invaluable perspective that kids have to offer. She is passionate about education, and believes that learning should be an immersive, engaging experience for all.

Sydney Segal

Sydney has been with Camp EDMO for over 12 years –– as a camper for seven, then a leader-in-training, counselor, and now… an EDMO Coach! She is currently a rising sophomore at UC Berkeley, with an intended major in Media Studies and minors in Journalism and Spanish. Aside from her passions for working with children, writing, and language, Sydney is an avid traveler, volleyball player, artist, and tutor. In fact, when she’s not editing her friends’ essays or leading repeat-after-me songs at summer camp, you’ll likely find Sydney at JoAnn’s Fabrics, passing a volleyball around, or planning her next trip abroad. Though learning can surely be difficult sometimes, Sydney hopes to inspire the same enthusiasm in kids for education and trying new things that she too developed at EDMO.

Lynn T Ortega

Music instructor, Fitness instructor, Writer, Editor, Artist.

Jacqueline Chis

Jackie is excited to be a part of the EDMO team. She has had so much fun being a camp instructor, and is excited to continue working with the EDMO method. Jackie is a Masters of Education student working on her teaching licensure at the University of Illinois Urbana Champaign. Her concentration is in secondary education and English but is excited to learn with children of all ages, K-12. She believes that learning should be centered around growth, curiosity, and each of our own individual needs.

Annie Lockmiller

Annie received a B.A. in Sociology from UC Berkeley, and will complete her M.A. in Guidance and Counseling from San Jose State in December 2020. Annie's goal in education is to make a connection with every student she works with. She seeks to help kids develop through compassion and exploring their interests. Annie is dedicated to promoting social justice and cultural awareness to help students develop an informed and open-minded perspective on the world. She also believes in laughter and fun in education. She has experience in working with students in STEM fields as well as Social and Emotional Learning. She has experience with academic and career counseling, and has worked with children from ages 3-18.

Julissa Martinez

Julissa Martinez is a recent college graduate from the University of California Merced, where she obtained a bachelors in Psychology and Public Health. She is bilingual; fluent in English and Spanish. The passion to create a space where she can help kids develop and grow to their best of their abilities with surrounding support and an encouraging environment is what strives her to be the best version of herself when working with kids. She has always been learning and working with kids from babysitting family members to volunteering and obtaining jobs focused on kids. Her career goals involve working with kids because she loves the experiences she's had with them; kids uplift and create a fun working environment. She enjoys including mindfulness and problem solving practices in her work. Education is a critical component in a kid's development so when she can do something to provide help or support, she is driven to take on that opportunity to get kids striving in all that they do. We can all strive to be the best version of ourselves.

Jordie Marie Rippon

Jordie Marie Rippon is A graduate student studying Creative Producing and Management at CalArts. She has previously received a Bachelor's of Science in Technology Communication and Theater. She loves to create an environment that makes it fun to learn and loves to encourage and empower kids to think about problems differently as a tool to help solve the problem.

Victoria Valencia

Victoria is a creative individual who has an interest in many different fields of work and study. From a young age she was always involved in after-school programs and extracurricular enrichment, and this has spurred her to tutor and coach various age groups and skill levels. She has a passion for community driven activities, strong commitment to positive development and growth, and an interest in mentoring young adults through shared experience. Victoria has a B.A. in English from San Diego State. She volunteers as a Zumba Instructor for SF Park and Rec, has previous experience as an Assistant Varsity Basketball coach, and this past summer worked as an EDMO Maker Instructor.

She believes that motivating and directing others in a supportive, cooperative, and collaborative way leads to an engaging and FUN learning environment.

Kera Marie Bruce

Kera is a recent graduate from Stanislaus State University with a degree in Art History and a minor in Anthropology. Her passion for the arts an culture shows through her methodology, combining arts, crafts, history and social-emotional learning in each of her lessons. Her priorities in each session include providing a patient and creative space for children to learn and discover their own interests and strengths.